Thursday, February 26, 2009

DiaBlog#1

"After i laid the map open on the dining table, Abba showed us the thick arteries if highways, the spidery blue line of the border"pg10

I picked these sentences because i like the way they are written. The narrative compares highways to thick arteries and the border to a spidery blue line. It gives you a really good image of what Nadira is seeing. 
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4 comments:

  1. ☾￡☂￡ϟ╬￡February 26, 2009 at 1:51 PM

    Awesome sentence! I agree it does give you a great image.

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  2. ~SamaraFebruary 26, 2009 at 2:06 PM

    Great sentence Amanda! It really does give u some strong imagery...good choice
    ^_^

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  3. katylFebruary 26, 2009 at 2:20 PM

    Nadira really does seem to have a very poetic mind. Good sentence- very dynamic. (yes, i'm in a sort of bigword mood...)

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  4. DaVaughn!February 26, 2009 at 2:23 PM

    Good Job,
    I agree that this quote does give a great imageof what Nadira is seeing. I think that she is laying out her journey. I look foward of reading more of the book!

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